Gerald was closest to his father. On his birthday, he got a pair of socks in his birthday party. Then the dad had told him to wait and had brought a retriever. That was a great moment for Gerald. Gerald just couldn’t stop laughing. A few years later, Gerald became a famous soccer player. However, he was asked for the army. Gerald surely wanted to serve his country, so he accepted. He was safe from a war that had occurred, but when he came home, he saw his dog laying on the floor and no sign of his father. Dead.
2018-2019 100 Word Challenge
Henrico County Public Schools
Hi Avani, well after that great start with a happy laughing Gerald what a shock ending! I like the way you have packed information into this piece and how you have moved through time so easily. Good work, well done.
Thanks (^_^)
BTW I USED YOUR ACCOUNT TO POST THIS!!!!!! HEHE
-Sydney
Avani this is so sad! Good job though
(^w^) Nice but (O_O) sad and (*_*) petrifying which is not necessarily a bad thingeie!