Gerald was closest to his father. On his birthday, he got a pair of socks in his birthday party. Then the dad had told him to wait and had brought a retriever. That was a great moment for Gerald. Gerald just couldn’t stop laughing. A few years later, Gerald became a famous soccer player. However, he was asked for the army. Gerald surely wanted to serve his country, so he accepted. He was safe from a war that had occurred, but when he came home, he saw his dog laying on the floor and no sign of his father. Dead.
Hi Avani, well after that great start with a happy laughing Gerald what a shock ending! I like the way you have packed information into this piece and how you have moved through time so easily. Good work, well done.
Thanks (^_^)
BTW I USED YOUR ACCOUNT TO POST THIS!!!!!! HEHE
-Sydney
Avani this is so sad! Good job though
(^w^) Nice but (O_O) sad and (*_*) petrifying which is not necessarily a bad thingeie!